The first challenge for the contestants.
but it kinda changed like... changed...
as in it felt like you skipped some parts in it
but overall good!
Oh, that was awesome! You didn't miss a thing! Don't listen to other people, that was great! I love to read this story, it makes me wish it were real.
Update soon, please!!!
Peace, love, recycle, GeRaRd,
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!Please!?!
This chapter was... just okay I guess... like the other were a lot better in my opinion.
Sorry but I think Gerard wasn't too much in character though... like I don't think he would exactly react to the bikini thing like that... but then again, I'm messed in the head so don't let me stop you.
Overall it was good and I can probably guess who is going out with Gerard. (: And the first surprise... I am excited about.
good job (Y)
love it alot,
haha a water fight..
Love the updated chapters...they are amazing more!
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