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• The Night Harry Turns Dark - The Rewrite!

  (#) Darkmark66 2011-03-12

  An excellent story and thanks for the advice.
  
  The bit about Tonks was very interesting Tonks could do anything and get away with it thanks to her gift and job as an Auror.
  
  I always thought Harry would be put in Azkaban or killed when he destroyed the Dark Lord given how society has treated him and how the Ministry is even with Tom Riddle dead it would take a life time of hard work to change the Ministry and its just not worth it.
  
  I like this dark Harry being good and golden only caused Harry pain being Dark will be fun and Harry has suffered enough so he should have fun, know pleasure and be free and happy.
  
  I hope he gets other slaves and uses his power, influence and that of his ladies to destroy anyone who stands against him or set things up to Albus and Tom destroy each other leaving Harry free to do as he wishes.
  
  I loved the Harry/Cho interaction its so rare for Harry to be assertive and really treat a slave like a slave as in so many fics he has a slave and treats them like a wife or has to be all but forced to do anything with them. I hope Harry will use Cho for more than sex her family business could be useful and Harry should test his new slave have her kill her friend and frame someone for it the sneak has many enemies and it would act as a powerful warning to those who would betray Harry and ensure Cho is loyal and be entertaining for Harry I think.
  
  I am so pleased there will be more to this story I am not surprised Harry has darkness within him he has known more pain and loss than he has love and affection and has been treated poorly by so many people.
  
  I look forward to your next story.
  
  

• The Night Harry Turns Dark - The Rewrite!

  (#) trenin86 2011-03-12

  Rewrite again Dragen? rewrite this, rewrite that. Seems like you can't make up your mind?
  
  And could you write anything that doesn't involve rape, slavery and dark Harry as the central theme?
  
  Anyway, why I made a review. You were already BANNED at adultfanfiction.net,
  
  http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296878041
  
  and now you still try and justify why you copied someone's work, and then say we are all plagiarizing Rowling's anyway?
  
  That's a WEAK argument. You copied someone's work because you're running out of ideas, and thought you could get away with it then.
  
  Good for you to have a rewrite, but I doubt this will get anywhere, since you're already known to break your promises.
  
  
  
  

  Author's response

  Yes a rewrite again, but not because I want to but to make people happy. If it wasn't for people moaning about me copying a small part of Rage Buddhas work, I wouldn't have done the rewrite. As for the others, its just because I got ideas that wouldn't fit in the story at the time and so need to rewrite it.
  
  It might be a weak argument, but it is how I feel. As for running out of ideas, no that isn't the case, I just couldn't write the rape scean.
  
  As for writing stories involve rape, slavery and dark Harry, I just can't write 'light' stories like other people can. I have tried to, but I just can't do it.
  
  And what promises are you talking about?

• The Night Harry Turns Dark - The Rewrite!

  (#) wemayberry 2011-03-13

  Interesting beginning. Hopefully you will continue this story as there are so few truly Dark Harry stories with Harems.
  
  Suggestions for the Harem are :
  Herminone & Luna
  Tonks & Fleur
  
  Minions :
  Mrytle the Ghost
  Dobby , Winky and Kreacher the House Elves.
  Millicent Bulstrode
  Mudungus Fletcher

• The Night Harry Turns Dark - The Rewrite!

  (#) trenin86 2011-03-13

  People moaning? It's plagiarism and cheap ass copying.
  
  So if no one complained that you copied entire texts, then you'd continue and think you'd get away with it?
  
  You were banned once, you know. Learn to be a MAN and admit your mistakes. Don't ever justify what your did was right.
  
  Good luck writing as many stories as you like, as long as they're are your own, get inspired by other stories, just don't copy word for word other author's works.
  
  
  
  
  
  

• The Night Harry Turns Dark - The Rewrite!

  (#) GrantLarceny 2011-07-19

  never heard of this rage budda guy so carry on soldier!

• The Night Harry Turns Dark - The Rewrite!

  (#) KorinDragoon 2016-09-15

  A few ideas on how to expand the harem Hermione, Ginny, Gabriele, and I think Fleur all owe Harry life debts.
  
  I've seen a few fics where a veela who owes a life debt if the person they owe the debt to is not their lifemate they become that person's slave, also some where the life debts between of witches and wizards grow larger if not paid so both Hermione and Ginny owe Harry big on theirs so have him call in the debts and since their so large he can ask for anything.
  
  He can get Tonks through a debt that her family owe to the house of black, read a fic where this happened Mrs Tonks made a deal with Sirius's mother to barrow money to pay for potions to save Ted Tonks' life and the money wasn't paid back in a certain timeframe then Andromida Tonks' daughter would become a slave to the then Lord Black.
  
  Another person you could would be Su Li as revenge for the way she treats Luna another one of Harry's slaves, Luna joins willingly after finding out due to her abilities like she does in Animagus Mishap.

• The Night Harry Turns Dark - The Rewrite!

  (#) Knighthammer38 2025-04-21

  Great story. Why abandon it?

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