Review for you can keep my brother
you can keep my brother
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-06-28 11:07:46 AM
I liked the Im not digging this family line!! Still doesnt compare to Im his gay lover though. Youre never gonna be able to top that.
The dialog was strong between Sky and Gerard. I like it. Showed shes growing up. I dont think she realized how bad what she was doing was. And this just makes her closer to Gee and Mikey and the guys. Maybe she'll start pulling it together now. That would make her mom sooo happy. lol.----xoxo
The dialog was strong between Sky and Gerard. I like it. Showed shes growing up. I dont think she realized how bad what she was doing was. And this just makes her closer to Gee and Mikey and the guys. Maybe she'll start pulling it together now. That would make her mom sooo happy. lol.----xoxo
Author's response
lol...you know i was worried that dialog between them is too much, over the top but i'm glad you liked it!!
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