I am so sorry that I am the first one to review you, it seems you've had this story out for quite some time (A day is too long without a review, am I right?) I don't know if its just that my peers give me stories similar to your grammar and me just nice. You were giving an example of what Anna did on daily basis right? Just check the grammar and spelling. I'm curious on how your skills and your story grows from here. Overall, I'd give it a 7.5 out of 10! Good luck out there!
Author's response
Thank-you so much and yes I'm with you on my poor grammer skills. I hope to further develop them so they are up there with my spelling skills which seem to be pretty high. And thank-you for the rating aswell. I will be working on the next chapter/page soon.