Damn, I wrote this long-ass review for this chapter and Ficwad deleted it, dammit.
But anyway, I'm so glad that there isn't a punk Mary-Sue that everyone falls in love with instantly. (I hope I'm not speaking too soon.) But this, while very I'm Not Okay-esque, is also original with the little bios in the end. (I meant 'age' when I said 'problems' in the last review.)
So, yes, once again, great job and keep it up! (I'm sure you will.)