oh my gosh, i honestly almost cried...
wow. your such an amazing writer, i couldn't even begin to describe.
you know, there are very few writers that I'll follow. I usually only read finished stories. But not thisa one. This is amazing...
Just though I'd let you know, you've inspired me to write my own. Your like... my internet hero..
oh, and please, don;t kill them.. and iff you do, make the story end happy... like honestly, happy endingings always prevail :]