honestly, i couldn't really fully grasp the "romance" between gerard and lee in the begening because uhm...this is gonna sound stupid...but i just cant imagine gerard with a girl who wears a 'silver locket'. what the fuck?
im mean...the girl just dosen't fit gerard's character well in a way that you can feel a 'sort of' conection, so when they split, i didn't feel too bad.
although, i do like the story line. please continue :].
Author's response
Silver locket? Huh? If I wrote that I may just have to cut my hands off.
But it's your opinion, I guess I know that they don't really 'fit' or 'connect' but there is a saying that opposites attract. I also don't think that every couple is happily ever after.
I'm glad you like the story line.
Thamnks for the review!