Review for You're a Sad Cartoon of a Broken Heart, Bleeding All Over the Place.

You're a Sad Cartoon of a Broken Heart, Bleeding All Over the Place.

(#) Life_is_42 2007-09-11

where is the love? i'll gladly love jon XD okay that sounded pervyer than intended..sorry XD

lol
btw, being the team j-walk person that i am, i have to make note that i found this description perfect.

It was less awkward with Jon. He was such a happy and easy going guy. And more importantly, he was mature.... and pretty sexy too.


exactly why we love him (plus he eats veggies woooot for healthy food...and manflops XD)

alright, but more seriously, i love the original new twist to this story, and i cannot wait to read more and more and more XD also i can totally relate to what you were saying earlier about knowing where you want to know, but the careful plot developement (and for me relationship developement, cause i just want to dive into the relationships full blast) can be tedious, but is very necessary. i think you're doing a brilliant job so far though, so just stick with it! it is appreciated by us readers...or me at least XD

Lifey