snap. this is the longest story i've had to catch up on. but it was so worth it. i love the tour. gym class, aar, and fob; such love. i like the way you portray travis. i'm not a pete fan, but sometimes there is just such a great connection between two characters i can't help but get caught up in it. this is definitely one of those, emi & pete are great together. can't wait for your next update.
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