I loved this. It was extremely well written. And I have no idea why no one has reviewed this. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter (presuming you will carry it on, because you totally should).
I don't know why, I just have a great feeling about this story.
Uh, that review was a compliment, just a really bad one. In other words I ADORE this already, and can't wait for more!
(also, if this turns out I've like, triple posted or something, you have my apologies, because the review won't send).