Review for The Sharpest Lives Are The Deadliest To Lead

The Sharpest Lives Are The Deadliest To Lead

(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-09-24 08:54:15 AM

Wow! That was a great start! Very powerful...
I loved how you started mid-scene like that. It was very intense. I love the way you write. You dont give too much away, it just kinda sucks you in and you have no choice but to just go with it...
I cant wait to read the rest! Good job!----xoxo

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