Review for Genetic Design For Dying

Genetic Design For Dying

(#) katrina-anne 2007-09-27 01:29:59 PM

i think that you should change it to first person in elles pov
so we can see what shes thinking and stuff?
well great chapter anyway
cant wait for more

Author's response

Yea thats what i wass thinking and i think i will do it but i might flick it to and fro every now and then but i will be sure to make it clear when i do! lol

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