I can tell your thinking about someone in real life. I'm thinking your Saffy and Patrick's a guy and Pete's a girl.
I just get that feeling, like even if you don't mean to, it's subconcious.
Great writing. :) Tell Patrick to stop being well, unreasonable.
Author's response
You my dear, are right!
Well, sort of.
All of this comes from the heart--- Just sort of in a obsessed fangirl writing about the life of band members way. Anywho, thank you tons for teh review!