Review for Twin Hearts

Twin Hearts

(#) Terrenea 2007-10-06

You should really try to write more, because this story was sweet and shows great promise. ^^
If it wasn't meant as a short story/one-shot I would've liked, hm.. to know a little more about their history/past; but as it is now it's really good.

You mispelled sometimes though; you wrote "there" instead of "their".