Review for The Sharpest Lives Are The Deadliest To Lead

The Sharpest Lives Are The Deadliest To Lead

(#) hopeanne 2007-10-12 07:15:55 PM

ugh. I so demand a re-write!
I know you said youre going in for surgery so Im gonna cut you a break but shame on you. Suck a short chap!!!
And the wording isn't like usual.
Gerard shouldve known it was Ryan. I mean he was 'tracking' his blood with his awesome vampire-y senses...
How could he be like 'whos there?' Unless he was being rhetorical which is okay, but then the next sentence should say 'as expected' or something to show he knew it was him. ugh. I cant decide if I hate you or love you...

okay. I decided. I love you. :)
please update as soon as you can.
Hope your surgery goes well!

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