this chapter was very cute and it was good to have a lil background info ...
dont get bogged down in it though
its not necessary
as ive said before it flows better when its told by the characters to others rather than interior monologue...
anyway good chapter
update soon
xoxox
Author's response
thanks =]
but it is necessary to know these things for what i have planned for later chapters, actually.
i am putting this all in here for a reason.
and i can't suddenlly change the monologue, all my others are 1st person . i don't wan't you to know exactly what Madison is feeling yet so i won't but it told by her or i will have to express more of her feelings which i want to keep in shadows for now.
thanks for the review though.