Oh my gosh. This is my new favorite chapter.
So much depth.
I mean you never really get into Skylers emotions.
She seems so much more rounded now. Like Im glad the lies are finally catching up to her. Its been bothering me that like shes never bothered by anything. Like if i was Gerard Ways wife. Fuck everyone would know about it!
But I just loved how you wrote it out. Like how she knew that like she had to smile for his sake. That was really good. Shows how much she really loves him. Like sometimes Sky seems self centered, like when she pouted about him not going to walmart. But like when it counts she knows what to do. Self-sacrifice...its a big part of love.
A whole other level to their relationship.
And the scene where she was scared where like they surrounded her. That was good! I really felt that. I mean Skys always use to having these 'guys' her friends around protecting her and it was good to see her vulnerable like that. I liked it. And I loved how she like wanted them to bust the guys up for her. Its like a guilty thought. Like you dont want guys to fight. I mean I say it all the time. But theres something about a guy sticking up for you like that...
Author's response
yeah i know i never went into it, like denying she was his wife, i think mainly cause she never been around him in a professional environment so she never had to deal with it..like she was home and when he went home, he was like her husband and that was it so yeah...