Review for Wild
Wild
(#) Rous 2007-11-05 02:02:46 PM
Extremely interesting. I figured out the characters fairly soon, but that did not detract from the enjoyment of the story.
One suggestion about differentiating the two characters: you could write the ship's voice in italics, if the site posted will allow it.
I was pleasantly surprised at this. Very nicely penned.
Thank you for sharing.
One suggestion about differentiating the two characters: you could write the ship's voice in italics, if the site posted will allow it.
I was pleasantly surprised at this. Very nicely penned.
Thank you for sharing.
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