Not a bad start to the story, but I have to say that you could put more paragraphs into the chapter to make it easier to read.
Poor Ron, he daed in taking the Killing Curse for Harry.
Who would have thought that Hermione, Ginny, and Tonks would become slaves.
Could I use ASD, also known as Associative Servitude Disorder. As I think it would work will for my story. PM if it is ok.
I like who Harry has for slaves.