Once again I am liking your story more and more by the chapters. I thought the Hermione deal was genious and it shows his anger and dark side, The sex scenes in this chapter were very well the only suggestion I could give about that would be is to include more dialogue in the actual sex scene, Also I to believe that there shouldnt be every girl in hogwarts in the harem but he should get around to most but keep a selective few like you said, Also the black sisters should stay as a pair like the patil twins, I like you also like Ginny and dont understand why everyone hates her but I believe you did right by keeping her or using her in the story as part of the harem. Harry should seduce atleast one teacher throughout the story. Instead of slughorn you could have a hot sexy potions teacher, Other wise I am liking your story by the chapter and its easily getting into my top harem stories as it has a better plot than most and is well written, once again only suggestions I would have for sex scenes is even more detailed and dialogue durring sex (Moaning,Yelling,shouting,talking and what not because chances are they wouldnt just have sex and not a word go between them) Keep it up and update often as possible but dont rush your work