I don't really think anyone hates Ginny for any reason other than needing a few people to hate. Granted, most people seem to think the 6th book relationship came out of nowhere and they hate that, while others think she pulled a Merope Gaunt and dosed him. Personally I'm indifferent to her. I like her better when she's dark, like I'm planning her to be in my future story. If she's a follower (goody-goody, dumbdore follower, etc.) in a story, then I'd off her without another thought. Anyway, these scenes were better, but I still feel they need a bit more fleshing out as you said. Good chapter. Keep up the good work, and I hope you keep these regular updates up.