Good story, and I can't wait until the next chapter is up. One thing though, the liege, liege lord , whatever would be Harry, while Neville and everyone else of the same ilk would be vassals, not liegemen or liegeladies.
The vassal is in service of his/her liege/liege lord.
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Thanks, and you're most likely right.
I've been told that the way i use it is more odd than wrong, though. Odd i can deal with, but vassal does sound better. I'll switch from here on. Ah well, another bloop to the list..
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