Review for Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves

Harry Potter and the Making of Sex Slaves

(#) Dragen 2008-01-10

Not a bad start to the story, I like that Harry made his aunt into his own sex slave, mahaha, though you could have a beta writer to look over it to make it beter.

You could have placed more paragraphs into the story, the main time you could do this is when people are talking.

As the saying goes - Payback is a bitch. I like what he did to the bitch.

Why did you do this story in the 2007. I do hope that Harry will be like a true master, and not one in which the lidies are in control, or he makes them as equles, as there are TOO many of them out there. I hope there will be many sex sceens.

Update soon.