I liked this chapter. I really liked the way Harry dealt with headmaster; smarty and powerfully.
Umbridge was surprise, but I think you have something very good (nastily good) planned for her.
Fudge; I think he should be removed. Then who should be minister. If you want to do something drastic, then Tonks (I did say drastic). Otherwise go with norm and choose Amelia (NOT Arthur).
So, in a subtle way without telling everything he explained his power and belief. Very good.
One thing stuck me odd.
- Why Harry din't know about attack on Tracey and Pansy while he knew about attack on Nevellie? Tracey has pendant too. I think it should be changed,Something like Runes in their necklaces
- How did Snape know about Pansy and Tracey?
He should rip Hermione one and make her change her beliefs.
Dumbledore should be subdued even more but not directly by fighting. Subtly, without risking ire of public.
Waiting for next chapter. You din't update this week. Please do.
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For some reason Ficwad din't get my first comment. If i tcomes there then please dis regard first one
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I read this chapter today because for some rason Ficwad is not counting your chapters correctly. I thin kyour story has "21" chapters not "20". That's why I missed it before.