Review for While Love's On The Line

While Love's On The Line

(#) xXHeavenHelpUsXx 2008-02-15

yayayayay!!!!
i lopved the update!!!
and i don't know why but for some reason i loved it when you said "coughed out his tongue"
i have no clue why but it was kinda hot...
and i loved how gee was stutterind and being all swwet and stuff
DUMPO WILONA THAT BITCH!!!
updates!!!
-Lindsey Lachrymosa

Author's response

Yeah...I guess that was pretty hot...thanks!