"And most of all, those eyes were not his. His were alive, always wide and the window to all of his emotions." I loved these lines, they made go all mushy inside :)
I'm so so so satisfied with this chapter, really! Haha, now we all know that she's a bitch!!! YESSS HAHAA xD Though maybe there might be the slightest exaggeration at her characterization, she kinda sounds like the evil women from a film noir =P
And I'm sure Frankie wasn't hallucinating, I want to believe that Gerard really has grown to dislike her.
Now I'm gonna go over and rate this exciting, meaning that I can't wait for the next chapter. And probably write something myself, after...
P.S: Oooh, since she turned out to be a real bitch, my previous theory was proved wrong. But I forgot to explain what I meant by her having powers like Peter: Peter adopts the powers of other people who possess them. He's like a power collector. I'd thought someone from the Ruins might have adopted Alyssa's power and he/she would be pretending to be her... Heee, just a theory ;)
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haha glad you like Alyssa turning out to be a bitch xD
Ohhh, wow. That is an awesome power, and your theory would have been interesting, but this is headed in a slightly different direction... haha
Thanks so much for rating ;)
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