Review for Heero's not picky

Heero's not picky

(#) gndmlvr01 2006-08-03 03:58:59 PM

Funny, but a couple really simple grammar errors and a few really egregious ones. Not enough to rate you illiterate (since they didn't have a softer complaint), but definitely something that should be beta-ed. Still, I loved the last sentence.

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