Review for Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her

Bet You Ten Bucks I Can Make You Regret Her

(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-04-30

:O
This just keeps getting even better by each chapter. I'm serious. This is just... Amazing.

A quote I absolutely ADORED--
"Beat up and left on the sidewalk to bleed sorrow and shed happy tears from its open, joyous sores."

I just thought that sounded lovely. As well as most of the chapters, but yanno.

Don't feel as though you were rude. Everyone should review! :]
But, alas, the lack of support around here is increasing. :[

No worries, though! This is amazing, and the amount of feedback that you're getting on your first fic is incredible. (This is your first fic, right?)

Anyway, amazing, amazing, amazing.

You must update soon. :]

Author's response

yeah this is my first :i

sorry thats supposed to look happier