Review for For the Greater Good

For the Greater Good

(#) Cateagle 2008-05-04

Whoa!! There's a lot to take in this first chapter, but it definitely captures the reader's attention. It certianly looks like Dumbles did a lot of manipulation here, both directly and through proxies, and I suspect it's turning back and biting the proxies big time. You've set up quite a scene and I rather expect that Pansy's trial is going to be anything but the "sure thing" the Prosecution expects.