Review for For the Greater Good
For the Greater Good
(#) red_jacobson 2008-05-07 07:00:40 PM
Very interesting; and; yes, you are right, it's rough and unpolished, and could really use a beta, but still interesting as hell!
Something I'm confused about, though. In the last couple of paragraphs, Harry says something about the potions and mentions the Twins and Percy, I can't tell if those three were also in on it or not. Also, what's this about taking the Malfoy fortune away from Hermione? That didn't make sense
Looing forward to the next chapters
Something I'm confused about, though. In the last couple of paragraphs, Harry says something about the potions and mentions the Twins and Percy, I can't tell if those three were also in on it or not. Also, what's this about taking the Malfoy fortune away from Hermione? That didn't make sense
Looing forward to the next chapters
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