Review for The Odd Pair

The Odd Pair

(#) RippedIntoPieces 2008-06-15

Awww, poor wiL...jealousy really sucks.
wiL is my favourite, he's a cool guy and it makes a nice change from frerard all the time.
And he does sound slightly like a stalker.
I really like this story, and clearly so do lots of others so maybe, can you update???