Review for Naruto.Drabbles

Naruto.Drabbles

(#) Afuna 2006-08-12

I like this drabble. It showcases Sakura's strength in so few words.

Can't decide whether I like "Sakura tries harder than she should..." or "Stopping aches more than following" better, so I won't try. I'll like them both equally (very much). Hah!

I like how the mood transitions from the desperation/frustration in the beginning to the deliberate effort of pulling back and calming down.

I'm curious about the last line though. I can't seem to make out whether it's Sakura's thoughts or a quote from something else.

Either way, it is a beautiful line. A nice and solid end to the piece.