it wasn't so much that it was confusing in the sense that it needed to be fixed as much as the actions of the characters are very different from what you see in most storys, it takes a bit of getting used to, but I think that's part of what makes it good.
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Katie
Author's response
ah yes. see we HATE cliché stories. Patrick meets her, Patrick falls in love, they get married and thats the end. no heath ache, no confusion, no trials and problems. those stories make me wanna pull my hair out only because what REAL relationship do you know that is like that. shit not mine, my relationships suck. the person Cal was dating in the beginning of this story with the texts to another girl.. yup that REALLY happened to me. so yea we try and make it as realistic as a fic can be i guess. sorry for the mix up lol we didn't think their were enough stories on here like that so we made one! if you think this story is not like any you've read and is nothing like every other fan fic then weve done our job correctly.
thanks for supporting our craziness.
Cal&Gin