That is really cool! Write some more on it. Or better yet can I have permision to write on it? I won't post anything but I would love to let the character lose as a demon who remembers who he is.
I have a few really cool characters that I would love to throw into a plot with him. Any way, hit me back for a chat!
I really like your way of writing it is quite different to a lot of low grade stuff I put up with me! You are definately tops and I would love to be able to work with your characters!
Love DsP