That was perfect, really. I loved how Savvanah said, "I'll let you be Ken this time." Mostly because that means he was prohibited from being Ken at some point.
Violet is delightful, and a little crazy. I like it.
Moreover, I adored the awkwardness and embraced it. It was just adorable. And the way you described Violet was very sophisticated.
I think that is how I will classify your writing from here on.
Sophisticated Adorableness.
I think I will stop rambling about how much I enjoyed this now.
Author's response
Hahaha. Savannah. I liked how I wrote her. Kind of like, the annoying, yet adorable little sister. :]
Sophisticated adorableness? Haha. I like it.
I'm happy you liked it. I was actually afraid people might have not enjoyed it so much.
-shrug-
Thank you for the review!