Review for For the Greater Good

For the Greater Good

(#) dennisud 2009-01-08 04:45:48 PM

First a great plot and story development which means I'll read more to see how this goes.

But, the grammar misused and misspelled words, missing words all contributed to a stunting of the reading experience.

Please get a beta reader to catch all the errors cause you have talent just needs fixing up!

dennisud

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