Review for For the Greater Good
But, the grammar misused and misspelled words, missing words all contributed to a stunting of the reading experience.
Please get a beta reader to catch all the errors cause you have talent just needs fixing up!
There are some grown-up things Hunny wouldn't mind trying. [Haruhi/Hunny]
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Don't worry your sweet little head. It won't ever leave you. One day it will take over. You would gi...
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"Rain is a hindrance. It gets in the way of your plans. It gets in the way of living. It's just plai...
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