Review for For the Greater Good
For the Greater Good
(#) dennisud 2009-01-08 04:45:48 PM
First a great plot and story development which means I'll read more to see how this goes.
But, the grammar misused and misspelled words, missing words all contributed to a stunting of the reading experience.
Please get a beta reader to catch all the errors cause you have talent just needs fixing up!
dennisud
But, the grammar misused and misspelled words, missing words all contributed to a stunting of the reading experience.
Please get a beta reader to catch all the errors cause you have talent just needs fixing up!
dennisud
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