Review for The Perfect Dream

The Perfect Dream

(#) Ashwee 2009-01-15 11:44:03 AM

Adorable short story.

I think you actually did a very good job considering grammar and spelling error's. You sound like your a talented writer. The sense were described perfectly. And this line. . . "Not until you pay the fee.”. . . clever, very clever.

I rate the story +1 for Ambiance.

:)

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