Review for Untitled Revenge
Untitled Revenge
(#) Misk 2006-08-26 03:50:09 PM
I enjoy that you used so much of the surrounding mood to express the feelings of the characters. Naturally you described how they were feeling too, but there's a real art in letting the averting of the head or the flicker of an eye show what the feelings are.
I think this was a good mix of atmosphere and description. And you captured the character of both of these people very accurately.
I think this was a good mix of atmosphere and description. And you captured the character of both of these people very accurately.
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