ohhh, i love ittt! its so cute, and adorable, and i love pete in the sleepover part! so cute.
and the kiss on the first date... oh, adorable
i think you should keep going, and btw: if you would like to use me as a character, go for it. i have no idea where or what your going to use me as, but.. go for it! lol.
Author's response
Thank you!!! Yeah, I wanted them to seem like the perfect couple to make it more a mystery why the broke up.
I'm writing more right now and you'll see how you fit in. =]
THANK YOU AGAIN! YOUR REVIEWS ARE LIKE RYAN ROSS' GIGGLES: EPIC!!!