Review for Only The Strong Survive (Forbidden Pt 2)
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-08-13 01:54:57 PM
i'm still with Frank being the father of Jasmine, and GW being the father of Lyn's child.
i just really like Frank in this story.
oh and I think i may have said ages and ages ago, but how freaky weird that the character is called Lyn? I know it was before Lynz ever arrived on the scene. Just how fucking weird is that?
love this story! you are English are you? or Oz/NZ? i noticed how you spell certain things. unless i am insane.
thank you muchly.
Most people are rooting for Frank to be the father of Jasmine.
I like Frank in this story too, he's so sweet. I'm glad I made him like that lol
I know what a weird co-inkeedink that she's Lyn and his real life wife is Lynz. Strange but true.
And yes I am English I try my best to remember to spell things the american way mommy insted of mummy etc but sometimes I forget. Never mind.
Glad you like the story see you next chapter xx
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