FicWad

I concur with Anthony. Though the premise seems nice and the start is relatively well executed, it really seems as if it's... well, I hesitate to say "rushed", because whilst it does seem that way it also manages to take ages to actually get to where you're going.

And, what purpose is there to adding a multitude of OC characters (each with their own pets, no less, which just complicates things further).

I've only read the first chapter so far, so perhaps it improves later on.