Bravo! I liked it when Nathaniel came along. His name is totaly mysteriouse yet calm and collected. This must have took you a while to write, or are you one of those people that get a quick idea, type it down, and the whole thing turns out to be totaly perfect! Thats the way I am. Any way, great job! I just hope you dont become a better writer than I am! ^_^
PS: Please read "The Silver Dragon" Thank you! ^_^