Awwuh, that was cute :) The Romeo and Juliet part was to die for xD
Thanks, glad you liked it!
I was really nervous about this piece, beacuse it isn't humor, and I didn't discuss this idea with anyone, so yours is truely the only feed-back I've had! So thank-you again!
I was memorising lines for my school musical- which is Fame- and two people do a brief Romeo and Juliet sketch (?) and BAM! The idea was there :)
Oh, and please don't give up on your story! Please, it's really good! I don't always review (even though I should- you may arrest me) but I love it!
Love Rae xo