oho!!!!! kill me!!! this...is...SEXY!!!!!!! i finally got to the university today so i can read the story!!! i'm loveing it!!!
"'Oh my cheese!!!'" I LOVE that one!!!! I'm going to use it all the time. And you used 'betch'!!!! OMG i love KELLY!!!! eek!!!
and then you used the word bugaboo. Really, Luma? That word was cool when I was in 7th grade...i'm getting ready to turn 23 on the 27th of january. ouchies. that word made laugh.
the best part is when Bob called Frank fun-size!!!!
THAT killed me the most!!!! Oh, thanx for the Christmas present! i'm so glad you rewrote it! It's actualy going somewhere. (For once.)
I hope us four get to go to japan this year...me, you, and our lovers. (No names, please.)
I LOVE this story!!! it's too much!!! Fun-size! HAR HAR!!!!
onto chapter 2!!! (and i'm printing this out so i can take it home to read it!!!)