I kind of like this story, but I think it's a little rushed so far... It's only the third day of school and she's already daydreaming about passionately kissing her art teacher and she has two close friends...
I like the plot and everything, but I think it's going a little too fast. That's just my opinion.
But I still really like this :)
Author's response
I know what you mean, and I appreciate the honesty.
Thanks so much for reviewing :)