Review for Patrick's story

Patrick's story

(#) thehagensong 2010-02-17

Epic. Friggin. Sauce.
Seriously, this is great. :P
You should get yourself together and write me a new chappy pronto.
Ahah, as per usual, Pete is the jackass. Though I must say, it won't be complete until he rapes someone. lol.

Author's response

I has the next few chapters written out. This is actually a short story, rather than a long one. Le gasp. I wrote a short story. lol.

Yeah, he's definitely a jackass in this one, as usual. I think this one is better without rape, just 'cause. lol. So, he's not a 'complete' jackass, I guess. :P