Review for ::Akatsuki love story:: Chapter 1: What was that?

::Akatsuki love story:: Chapter 1: What was that?

(#) Mairead 2010-03-01

This was more literate than what I was expecting. But just so you know, most people look down on "self-inserts"-- fanfiction where it seems like you're writing about yourself.

I think you'll be a good author one day.