Review for I Like It When We Touch
I Like It When We Touch
(#) littleblinkingstar 2010-04-14 06:17:53 AM
hey there,
you asked for our thoughts, otherwise i wouldn't write this:
i thought the first chapter was brilliant - a great idea, having frank not knowing anything about sex. but then i thought it went the usual way, like suddenly he thinks that it's wrong to be with the same sex? ...personally i think you should have stayed with the extreme, and let him really be a complete fool about it, cause it's a really good idea XD
you asked for our thoughts, otherwise i wouldn't write this:
i thought the first chapter was brilliant - a great idea, having frank not knowing anything about sex. but then i thought it went the usual way, like suddenly he thinks that it's wrong to be with the same sex? ...personally i think you should have stayed with the extreme, and let him really be a complete fool about it, cause it's a really good idea XD
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