Review for Salvation

Salvation

(#) jabarber69 2010-06-29 11:35:18 AM

So far I like the story, but Harry should of just went ahead and killed dumbydork, and then obliviated the other 3 idiots....I wonder if they even thought of the next dark lord that they insinuated was forming into harry potter was in fact dumbydork himself, of course not, since he had brainwashed them... hey since harry is basically the head of house black couldnt he do something to tonks, that is if she and her mum have been welcomed back into the house of black....

I say again, Harry made a huge mistake in leaving dumbydork alive!!! and by killing dumbydork and obliviating the other three wouldnt have started him down the road to darkness, he said himself that he couldnt go dark per that crystal thingy, but by taking out dumby he would be insuring his and gin safety....

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