Review for Fml
Okay, chill. I wasn't trying to insult you, I'm trying to help you. I'm almost positive that I'm not the only one who thinks that, I'm just being more honest and forthcoming than others. Oh and if your computers format changes it into codes than you can just go on Dictionary.com and see if you spelled things right. Plus, you could fix your punctuation if you tried. You don't need a computer to tell you to put a space in between the comma and the word after it.
Laney.
Author's response
I wasn't being defensive. I was just saying that if you don't want to sound too harsh then you shouldn't tell someone their story seems " unintellegent".
And what I mean by changing things into codes is when I update it from a word document to check all my spelling and such, It takes me almost an hour to retype every period, comma , and punctuation mark.
As for not having a computer tell me what to do, I have my friend Morgan. She already brought that to my attention and I've been trying to work on it.
Don't be so critical of someone elses work when you have not made yourself that vulnerable to criticism.
Normally I wouldn't be so annoyed with someones comment, But someone before you had already mentioned it to me and I said I would work on it.
That is why this has been updated without a new chapter, because of the editing I have been doing.
AddixxSin